Request Feedback on a Draft Cover Letter

Please critique my draft cover letter below based on the provided job description. Evaluate its effectiveness in:
- Addressing the key requirements mentioned in the JD.
- Showcasing relevant skills and achievements with impact.
- Demonstrating genuine interest in the company/role.
- Having a strong opening and closing/CTA.
- Overall clarity, tone, and persuasiveness.
Suggest specific areas for improvement.

Target Job Description:
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[Paste job description here]
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My Draft Cover Letter:
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[Paste your draft cover letter here]
"""