Check for Originality/Over-Reliance on Sources (Conceptual)

Review the following passage from my draft essay. Does any phrasing seem too close to common ways of expressing ideas about '[Topic of Passage]' or potentially unintentionally echo typical source material wording? If so, suggest areas I should rephrase to strengthen my own voice and ensure proper synthesis, while still citing any necessary ideas from my research (e.g., from [Author X's theory on Y]). This is for a self-check on originality.

Passage:
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[Paste a section of your draft essay]
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**Note:** This AI check is conceptual and for self-editing only. Always use official plagiarism detection software provided by your institution.